Roommates (audiobook redux)

[getinmystomach]

Hey all!
So a million years ago, I wrote a story called Roommates (it's still here actually). but anyways, I just recorded it as an audiobook. It's a rough first attempt so I'm very open to suggestions. I uploaded it on FurAffinity because it was the easiest, so if you don't have an account, it won't show up because it's "explicit." But anyways, let me know what you think. I added some sound effects here and there for effect.
Curious to see if I should do more of these.
Here's the link: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/29440057/

[invstg8r]

Vore audio is my absolute favorite
You did wonderfully

[Ike]

Nice first attempt! I recommend reviewing the story first and potentially rewriting parts that are a little awkward to read out loud. Your voice is a good fit for audiobooks and with practice the monotonous intonation will fade.


Also, if you work with, or start working with editing software more, you can shift the pitch and length of the "long, low belch" a bit. Right now that doesn't line up.


But yeah, I'm still rock hard while listening to this thing, so the essence is very impressive! Can't wait to hear you do more of these! :]

[getinmystomach]

Nice first attempt! I recommend reviewing the story first and potentially rewriting parts that are a little awkward to read out loud. Your voice is a good fit for audiobooks and with practice the monotonous intonation will fade.


Also, if you work with, or start working with editing software more, you can shift the pitch and length of the "long, low belch" a bit. Right now that doesn't line up.


But yeah, I'm still rock hard while listening to this thing, so the essence is very impressive! Can't wait to hear you do more of these! :]

That's super helpful, thanks! I definitely agree with the rewriting part. It was an old story, and DEFINITELY needed some polish. I'll keep playing around with the software and see what else I can do (I'd never used it before yesterday). But your comments are super helpful!

[thejipper]

Was one of my favorites from back in the day. Was there ever a sequel?

[tAsTyBoYeRiC]

It won't open the link for me    is there another way we can hear it

[Hamncheese]

Totally unrelated but I didn’t realize you had written bellying the bear! Thats one of the hottest stories on furaffinity!

[voreboy111]

Loved 'em.  Please make more.

[tAsTyBoYeRiC]

I was able to adjust my settings. Very awesome story.  We need more

[HanselVoRider]

Very hot, love the idea of audiobooks. Main criticism is too much use of the gurgling, that it distracts from the story and your readings